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All I ever Wanted.
Matthew Trlak
1999
All I ever wanted was to be near your warmth. To be seen, to be known. Here I am, the clown. Here I wear a frown, to think I wear a crow, you could never see it. You do not know me.People wish me gone, They never meet me, only beat me. This crown i wear tears my heart.
The crown I wear is of thorns, of burdens, remorse and my hatred. In your sight I am nothing spite of yourself, or am I. I cry but I never wish to die. I go on wanting to be near that flame, near that warmth.
But here I stand, looking in. Here It is cold. Colder then some people could ever know. That one thing that all I ever wanted..., was to feel that warmth.., that warmth of yours.
Matthew Trlak
1999
All I ever wanted was to be near your warmth. To be seen, to be known. Here I am, the clown. Here I wear a frown, to think I wear a crow, you could never see it. You do not know me.People wish me gone, They never meet me, only beat me. This crown i wear tears my heart.
The crown I wear is of thorns, of burdens, remorse and my hatred. In your sight I am nothing spite of yourself, or am I. I cry but I never wish to die. I go on wanting to be near that flame, near that warmth.
But here I stand, looking in. Here It is cold. Colder then some people could ever know. That one thing that all I ever wanted..., was to feel that warmth.., that warmth of yours.
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Again I used to be this whole shoot me now kind of kid long before I truly suffered loss and humiliation... back a an age of 13.... since hten 6 years of torment have occured, and yet I look at this and laugh so much for it meant only attention then, even though i wanted that last of all things...
anywho its narrative of how people always treated me since 6 years old.. and actually still kind of happens this way today..... So one of my poems ended on a note that never changed. Luckily I met people like you online who dont give in to appearnces or first encounters, and gave me a chance to be me ^_^, this is to ending my former self and to becoming who I am today
anywho its narrative of how people always treated me since 6 years old.. and actually still kind of happens this way today..... So one of my poems ended on a note that never changed. Luckily I met people like you online who dont give in to appearnces or first encounters, and gave me a chance to be me ^_^, this is to ending my former self and to becoming who I am today
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"to think I wear a crow," i think you meant "crown."
you need to stay solid with your punctuation. if youre going to capitalize what needs to be capitalized, its should stay that way throughout the piece. if you want to leave everything lowercase, then that too but be uniform.
also, you cannot put a comma after an ellipsis, too my knowledge ("...,")
you need to stay solid with your punctuation. if youre going to capitalize what needs to be capitalized, its should stay that way throughout the piece. if you want to leave everything lowercase, then that too but be uniform.
also, you cannot put a comma after an ellipsis, too my knowledge ("...,")